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Before you walk out, hear me out--
Girl, there is no doubt
you're going long routes;
just recollect this future reference:

Hold up; hold it down--
Sugar rush in high heels
is not the only way out;
not what it's all about.

Let things run their course--
Walk in other people's shoes;
Take a stand, corrected.

Now, turn around--
Display every angle of this attire;
it suits you rather well.

Take a seat for this--
I could break it to you easy, but;
bliss is ignorance.

& whether life's weather foreshadows a breeze--
you're gonna fall hard, swept off your feet
to weak knees. It's not over; it's over
& over
again.

Before you dive in, test the waters--
Girl, he's still your Father,
you're gonna go farther;
just forget those past recollections.
& when you let go of the past, yes--
You will downfall, a mess, a second guess
@ best;
& it's a long run for the best.



Thank You :cuddle:
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Gin-Palace Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Good stuff. It's a bit everywhere, but I think it matches the feelings of the narrator.
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RockerByBaby Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2011
Thanks much bud :highfive:
Yeh, not wanna my best for sure.
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Daiichi Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Great to see your style of poetry again :D*hug* This one was great. Confusing slightly, but great.
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RockerByBaby Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2011
:hug: Thank You.. I've got this splurge of creative flow @ the moment, as rash & irrational as it may unfold =P
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Daiichi Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Splurges rule though :D.
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RockerByBaby Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2011
:headbang:
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